"Seemed" is a bad word. I removed them where I could, and it strengthened the overall. Made things more immediate. I was right when I said I'll be editing for a while. I see the end of the month here and gone with me still picking through it all, making things right. If it takes to the end of the year and then some, so be it. I'm going to take my time. So far, I estimated I've made close to two thousand changes. And once I'm done with the list, I still have to read them all aloud, one at a time. Make more changes.